(thread part 1) http://bbs.acplayer.net/read.php?tid=2569

Hello, long time no see,

I have many trial and error.
but Can see outcome bit by bit.

here is some screenshot



Of course, there are many correction ponit.
I want advice for Translate, so looking for here and there for the improvement.
Maybe will soon be more good. 





[ a postscript ]

Can i release the Test Version of TBA(for English) ?
plz try it.


(10 / 20)
Thanks, i will release the Test Version soon !

Oh please do so! I can't wait for it anymore.

you cannot change your character after you choose one

应该是

others cannot choose the same character after you choose one


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And Its fine to release the Eng.ver TBA(I can help you to release it on other Chinese website if you want)


Good job!

 = = 前面的翻译错误多。when time is up 那边的行有句子结构问题。（Library名字是Viole, 红魔馆庭园应该是Scarlet Devil Mansion Garden 就行了）幽幽子的翻译还可接受，但最好跟着西洋官方名，解释还可以更好，更顺。

那么你就快快上线啊
我期待我们的版本推出的那一天

英语不好。。完全看不懂

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引用第4楼trexene于2009-10-19 15:19发表的  :
那么你就快快上线啊
我期待我们的版本推出的那一天

我当然想的。你应该明白偶现在的处境吧。。。

偶好不容易有fontcaft了，现在要找华语字体了。
  

哦 看了第一幅图....

1 player select place....什么意思？

1玩家选择地方= =。。是指任何1位玩家可以选择还是什么的？

要么就改为1st player。。。要么就player 1。。。

不要1 player。。。意思啥不懂= =

还有地方名字的of可以省略。。。of of of 的。。听上去很别扭。。通常就Scarlet Devil Mansion Garden...The Lost Bamboo Forest之类的

可以参考时代广场（Times square 而不是Square of the Times）...黄石国家公园（Yellowstone Nation Park 而不是 The Nation Park of Yellowstone...)

把 "You can choose your character for 30 secs. When time is up. the character will be choosed by random. You cannot change your character after you choose one."
改为
"You will have 30 seconds to pick your character. If you have not picked your character in time, you will have a random character. You cannot change your character after you picked one."
应该比较好= =

Bamboo Forest of The Lost 就保持，因为官方英文也是这样命名，就是Garden of SDM 改成SDM Front就行了。

1 Player 应该改成1st Player/Player 1，Select Stage。 stage 比 place 恰当。

看来偶的线要等到约10月18日才会恢复正常。

看来你很难= =